Some fun clues there - I liked 1d and 20a for example. I'm not the best at giving detailed feedback on grammar etc but I'm sure others will step in. Please do keep them coming! (spoilers in next comment)
Congratulations on publishing your first cryptic on the site. Plenty to like in here. I had ticks for 8a, 10a, 23a, 3d and 13d for the cheek of it. Thanks. PM
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